tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085694.post5776542585582988812..comments2023-11-02T21:46:26.482+13:00Comments on Violet goes green, sort of: Give a person a fish, they'll eat for a day.Violethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10547452802344363142noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085694.post-88703307587442318712007-05-26T17:24:00.000+12:002007-05-26T17:24:00.000+12:00Ok - cool. At least my attempt at humour wasn't co...Ok - cool. At least my attempt at humour wasn't completely lost. Well done with a pretty weak line I thought.Deterministhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04630233168632221706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085694.post-86560744332762388572007-05-26T12:19:00.000+12:002007-05-26T12:19:00.000+12:00Oh! I did go to the site you'd suggested, but I th...Oh! I did go to the site you'd suggested, but I thought the lines were a bit nonsensical. Still, I managed to make use of your non-line...Violethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10547452802344363142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085694.post-71173055851580575202007-05-26T00:02:00.000+12:002007-05-26T00:02:00.000+12:00Hmmm... I am a bad communicator.If you go back to ...Hmmm... I am a bad communicator.<BR/><BR/>If you go back to my original comment, I posted a link called "Story Starters", which gives you a web page that produces first lines for stories.<BR/><BR/>So, I was not giving you a fish, I was teaching you to fish... Bah! It sounds stupider as I write it.<BR/><BR/>Check that page out though, it has tonnes of whacky, crazy first lines that are sure to spark some ideas.<BR/><BR/>Now - I have to say, I like the flow of your story. It sounds real, it sounds like something that I want to keep reading - very nice.<BR/><BR/>Sorry for the confusion though.Deterministhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04630233168632221706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085694.post-36689116337795829382007-05-25T20:30:00.000+12:002007-05-25T20:30:00.000+12:00This comment has been removed by the author.Violethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10547452802344363142noreply@blogger.com